Tuesday, January 17, 2012

The lost boy

Title: The lost boy


Characters:

-Jake

-Drake

-Jake's & Drake's parents

-Fred (bad person and then good person)

-Annie (maid)


Setting:

-city, Mansion

-Forrest

-chocolate house

-houses

-Hospital


Story:

One day in a city named mansion there was a boy named Jake and Drake, they're parents went out of country and leave Jake and Drake at the house with one of their maid, Annie. At afternoon Annie asked Jake and Drake to take a nap so they went to they're room and went out from the window and play. But they were so bored so they run away to the Forrest to play hide and seek. Then there was a food house…


a. Are they curious and went inside?

b. Do they run away? They run really fast until they fell into a hole and they can't climb and never be found.


Then went in the house and eat all the food and there was a jar full of medicine so they kept them and also bring some food when they’re finding the way home and saw a man named Fred and almost kidnap Drake and Jake but they run so fast until Fred faint. Drake and Jake take a nap at the Forrest until the next day, and Fred didn’t even wake up and he get a bad fever, so…


a. Do they help Fred?

b. Do they run away?They ran away and cant never find the way home.


They help Fred and gave him 1 of Drake’s and Jake’s medicine and try to heal him. Half hour later Fred woke up and get healed, and the medicine actually can heal anyone in half hour. So Fred wake up and …


a.Do drake and Jake help Fred?

b.Do they ran away? They ran away and get chase again and again and finally they get kidnap.


Drake and Jake try to build a bed for him to rest and when he woke up he still get a little dizzy and he gave one more medicine and try their best to heal him even though he is a bad person and Fred as quite shock that Jake and Drake helped him and..


a. Do they try to teach Fred a lesson for trying to kidnap Jake and Drake while walking to the city?

b. Do they just stay there and do nothing? Fred's father came and kidnap Jake and Drake and busted Fred.


While they try to figure out the way out they taught Fred to do good things. Soon after 2 hours they're so hungry and take some foods and drinks from the food house and ate the foods. Soon is almost night and Annie know that they're lost somewhere so she's really panicking and tomorrow morning Jake's and Drake's parents are going to go back to their house. When at night they find the The city, Mansion and they were so happy soon at 8:30 they try to find their houses with Fred but they can't…


a. Do they ask for directions to go home?

b.Do they keep on finding no matter what? And they get lost again.


So they ask for directions and they finally get into Jake's and Drake's front gate and finally went inside and Annie get really shock and happy to see Jake and Drake but shy to meet Fred, but she welcome Fred to let Fred stay at the guest house and next morning when Jake's and Drake's parents came They were happy to see Jake and Drake and shock to meet Fred but Drake and Jake told their parents that Fred is their friend and Fred don't have any house. So Jake's and Drake's parents welcome Fred to sleep at their house until Fred can find his own house, and they all live happily ever after THE END.